Sunday, May 24, 2009
Breaking Dawn by: Stephanie Meyers
Wednesday, May 20, 2009
Searching for Summer by: Joan Aiken
“Searching for Summer” is a great story written by Joan Aiken. This story takes place in the time when Hiroshima and Nagasaki was bombed by the atomic bomb. The setting is in England and the weather is very cloudy and dark. Many people have been trying to search for a glimpse of sunlight all over England and no one has had any luck. The two main characters are a newly wed couple, Lily and Tom. For their honeymoon they have decided to go and look for sunshine. They take off on their journey early in the morning and drove all day trying to find a glimpse of sunlight. They didn’t have any luck. What made things worse was Tom’s scooter broke down and he needed it to be fixed. There was a town up a hill so they decided to stay there for the night. The town is very filthy and there wasn’t any sunlight. Lily and Tom stop at a bike station and they run into this old couple. Lily accidently grabs the old lady’s bag and she realizes it a couple of hours later. Tom and Lily decide to go and give it back. They find out the old lady’s house is in the forest, so they make their way toward her house. Once Tom and Lily get their the old lady wishes that they would stay for the night. Tom and Lily do and when they wake up they see sunlight! Both Tom and Lily stay for a couple of days until they realize that they have to go back and receive their bike. When they go back they run into some people that ask them where they were. Tom and Lily have to lie in order to let the old lady have peace and quiet in her little part of the woods. Or else if they tell then tons of people will migrate to that spot of sunlight and disturb the poor old couple.
In this story Joan describes what is going on in a very good way. Joan describes the mood by describing what the weather is like. She says that the sky is gray and always cloudy which helps set the mood that everyone is mad or grumpy just like the sky. The conflict in this story is man vs. society because Tom and Lily are trying to find sunlight along with tons of other people. This conflict helps make the plot. The climax is when Mr. Noakes runs into Tom and Lily and asks them where they have been. Tom and Lily have to lie and say that they lost track of time. They end up not going back because they were afraid that Mr. Noakes and the town would find out the patch of sunlight in the woods.
The type of characterization that goes on in the story is direct. Joan describes her characters through how they look and how they act and what they say. The two main characters Lily and Tom are round or dynamic characters in the story. Tom and Lily both start out looking for sunlight and once they find it they are different people. Tom and Lily are more happy people. Compared to the other characters who don't change at all. Those characters are flat characters. The protagonist is Tom and Lily and the antagonists is everyone else in the story except the two old couple. All of these elements of writing combine to set the mood of the story and also to make it a great story.
Wednesday, April 29, 2009
Odd Thomas by: Dean Koontz
Besides Odd being able to see all bodachs and dead people he lives a normal life. Odd works at a Grille and is deeply in love with this girl named Stormy. Stormy and Odd were destined for eachother because apprently they have matching birthmarks and this Gypsy mummy told them that they would love eachother forever.
The story begins when Odd sees a man that is surrounded by bodachs. Odd knows that this man is up to no good so he follows him to his home. Odd breaks into this man's home and finds out that this man actually has files about famous killers. While Odd is searching through these files of these insane killers he finds a file about this man that was surrounded by bodachs. His name is Bob Robertson. In Bob's file all it says is August 15th. The date is August 14th and Odd knows something bad is going to happen the next day.
Odd keeps a close eye on this guy and makes sure that his close friends including Stormy stays as far away from Bob as possible. The most surprising part to me is when you find out that the killer is something completely different! I can't tell you the end of the story but I will just tell that the end is unexpected, a little confusing, and sad.
There are some very weird things in this story that make me wonder if there are really people that act like this. Overall though the story is very well written and I wold reccomend this to people.
Sunday, April 26, 2009
"I Walk This Lonely Road" by: Ronnydell
To the right of me there is a line of houses. Each house looks the same. Each house has a front yard and a back yard with grass, plants, and a couple of trees to protect the porches. As I look around each house has a gate to protect the people from invaders. I am not protected from anything as I walk this lonely road.
I look to my right and I see my favorite dog, Da Bao. I call to her and she comes to me happily. Her paws are muddy from the dirt she palyed in. Her rib cage is clearly visible from lack of food. Da Bao is still smiling though as I rub her chin. Her breathing becomes quieter as she finally feels safe and comfortable. I check the time, 6:15, it is time for me to say good-bye. I wave good-bye to Da Bao. I can see the dissapointment in her eyes as I leave.
I walk this lonely road with my shoes splashing in the puddles now forming from the rain. I look down and stomp my feet to the ground feeling free. No one can tell me what I can't do now. Now I walk to the beat in my head, "Mr. Farenheit" by Queen. this beat is fast and upbeat, The beat makes me have an extra bounce to my step. That extra bounce makes the rain seem, playful and inviting. I walk slower letting the rain fall onto my hair and face.
I look around to see if anyone was looking. Everyone was in their homes trying to stay protected from the rain. I stop and stand in the rain letting the rain now fall down on my books and back-pack. I look down to see my books starting to soak in the rain. I knew they would get ruined if I stayed out too long. So I started walking down this lonely road.
Now my hair is wet and plastered to my head. I don't care now it feels good to be unprotected from something. Still no one is outside. They are most likely afriad of getting wet or catching a cold. The only time I have seen someone catch a cold was in movies. No one ever catches a cold from playing in the rain. I look down at my books, and I see them getting wet now. I check my watch again, it's now 6:20. I realize I have tons of homework still to finish. I now look up and see my house coming into view.
There are three trees in the front yard protecting the cars underneath from the rain. In the backyard there are three more trees protecting all the stray cats from the rain. Surrounding my whole house and yard is a gate that protects us from any intruders. Our house is the same as any other house on this lonely road.
I dread walking into this jail and doing the same thing over and over again. I try to walk slower into the front yard, but my conscience is stronger and it now pulls me closer to the protected home. I didn't want to walk in and lock the front door and then shut another door inside the already closed door. I didn't want any doors blocking me and this unprotected freedom. The rain seemed to whisper to me, "stay". I couldn't listen though to that lovely whisper. I could feel the watches ticking seconds pound on my wrist telling me to get inside and work on homework.
Now the steps came that led to this first door that would keep me inside for the next fourteen hours. My feet seemed to jump over those steps and to make it to that first door. Now my hand went up to the button to let my family know that I was home. My finger pressed the button and the sound of the bell echoed throughout the house. My mom answered the door as usual and said, "Ni Hao. How was your day?"
I had to answer the way I always do, "Ni Hao. My day was ok." That answer seemed implanted in my head because I answered her question the same way every single day. I now enter my protective jail. It felt stuffier compared to the space and fresh air outside. Outside the air was real compared to the air conditioned air inside my house.
I am now in front of the stairs that would lead me to my second door that would protect me again from the "chaos" of the house. I drag my feet upstairs. Each step seems heaiver than the first. I can almost hear the books laugh at me and mock me saying, "Haha! You have homework. I get to keep you in that room for the next three hours. You get to stress over me while trying to figure out what is the real situation in that story." I try to ignore their annoying voices, but their laughs grow louder and louder each step I take up those stairs.
I am now at the second door that leads to my room. In my room there is only one window that shows a tiny bit of freedom that I could have if only these books were gone. I plop on my bed and open the first book. Now the books try to control their laughs as I open them up and start my homework. The rain is still plopping outside. Now everyone is protected from the beauty of the rain. I have given into this protection.
Edith Merrielees
My Buddy
Later on that day we drove to this huge shelter where many people sleep in it. We payed for one of those rooms. I was so tired from all the protecting that I plopped onto the carpet and fell right asleep. Once I fell asleep I had another dream about those huge animals again. This time there were hundreds of them! They all smelled of anger. One suddenly grabbed John, my buddy, and run off with him. I started running after the huge animal, but I could not run fast enough. Then I felt a hand on my head patting me. I woke up and I saw John smiling at me. He smelled of comfort and pity. I realized that it was just a dream and that he was safe.
Friday, April 24, 2009
Photo Essay by: John Steinbeck
The second photo that I like is on page 931. This photo shows two children playing in the dirt. They both look a little shabby and poor. Behind the children there is a tent that is filled with pillows and basically their whole house. Right beside the girl there is a wagon with the wheels broken off. The tent has some holes in the bottom. Behind the tent there are some dried up trees that look dead. The ground is dry dirt that looks like it needs rain. The caption underneath the picture says, "We got to have a house when the rains come... jus' so's it's got a roof and a floor. Just to keep the little fellas off'n the ground." This caption helps tell again how the people are worried about the rain falling and everything being wet. The picture shows how certain people lived and how the conditions were before the flood.
"The Flood" by: John Steinbeck
"The Turtle" by: Steinbeck
Thursday, April 2, 2009
betrayal
If I was married and my husband left me for a stupid reason, I would HATE him. I am not sure what I would do, but I would definitely be mad. I would probably go crazy just like Medea did. I would probably forget about him and move on after about a year or two. If I saw him though when I was at the store or something I would probably say, "hi" and treat him as nicely as I could. Deep inside though I would probably not want to talk to him and even be near him. Basically I would not want to be around him or even talk to him.
If a friend betrayed me, I am not sure what I would do. I don't think that it would be a big deal because I would have other friends, but if a group of my friends betrayed me then I would not be sure what to do. If a group of my friends betrayed me I would probably become depressed and then try and find another group of friends. The only hard part would be that I would be seeing them every day until they move or until we graduate. It would take me awhile to forgive them, unless they said sorry.
Overall if someone betrayed me I would not be happy, but I would forgive them after awhile. If my husband said he was going to leave me I would become very mad and not want to be near him. If my friends betrayed me though it would be a lot harder for me to forgive them and even see them. I would still have to see them though because I have to come to school. I do not like betrayal at all.
Monday, February 23, 2009
The Chivalric Code, Antigone
Honest, Loyalty, Chastity, and Courage
These are some of the characteristics of a chivalric person. To me Antigone has all of these traits.
Honesty: In the play Antigone, Antigone was very honest. When Creon asked her if she did bury her brother she was very honest and told everyone what she did. I don't think I would have been able to be that proud about telling what I did to everyone. Especially when it was against the law to do it. Which brings me on to the next characteristic.
Courage: Antigone was very courageous by telling everyone so boldly that she did bury her brother and she does not think that it was the wrong thing to do. At the very end of the story when she committed suicide. I think that is very courageous to hang yourself. I would never want to do it.
Loyalty: I think Antigone was very loyal towards the gods. That is one of the reasons why she buried her brother. the gods rule was to bury someone or else their spirit will roam around forever. I think she was very loyal towards her brother by burying him even if she knew that she was going to be sent to jail.
Chastity: I know that Antigone did show chastity because she is a very honest and true person. From the play it sounded like she only wanted to do what is right instead of doing anything else. She was a very clean and pure person.
Tuesday, February 17, 2009
Compare and Contrast, Sir Lancelot du Lake
Monday, February 9, 2009
The Role of Woman in Antigone
In the play Antigone, the main character, Antigone, shows how strong woman can be during the play. One example is, when Antigone is arguing with her sister Ismene about burying their brother. Another example is, when Antigone argues with King Creon about why she buried her brother Polyneices. During these two situations Antigone shows how much women can do.
At the very beginning of the play Antigone and her sister Ismene argue about burying Polyneices. Antigone wants to follow the god’s rule and bury her brother Polyneices or else he will roam around looking for his spirit. When she tells her sister, Ismene, about burying her brother she disagrees and says they should listen to Creon and not bury Polyneices. Antigone disagrees with her and follows her conscience and the god’s rule. When Ismene decides not to bury her brother, Antigone says this to Ismene, “But I will bury him; and if I must die,/ I say that this crime is holy” ( Antigone Prolouge 55-56). That’s what is amazing about Antigone, she won’t listen to anyone except herself. She will always listen to her conscience and do what she thinks is right.
When Antigone is caught by the guards she is taken to King Creon. King Creon tells Antigone she is stubborn and always breaks the law. Antigone stands her ground and proudly says that she did bury her brother and she thought it was right. A phrase that I like was, “I do. I deny nothing.” (Antigone 1.2.52). One reason why I like this phrase is because Antigone said it so proudly to King Creon. That is what makes her a great example for women. Antigone always believes in what she does and never backs down. When King Creon was talking to Antigone she proudly said that she buried her brother.
Antigone is a great role model for all women. She always stands up for what she believes is right. When she was arguing with her sister Ismene she always wanted to do what was right. Another example of Antigone’s courageousness is when she faced King Creon and proudly said that what she did was right.
Thursday, February 5, 2009
Suicide in play Antigone
Antigone is the first to die out of the three characters. I think Creon shouldn't have been so stubborn and maybe she would not have died. When I read how Antigone died it surprised me. The way Sophocles wrote how she died made me feel so sad. I like Sophocles' way of describing how people die compared to Shakespeare's way of describing how people die. It was very unexpected to me for Antigone to hang herself.
As soon as Haemon found out how Antigone died he killed himself. The way the messenger describes how Haemon died was sad. It was sad how Haemon cryed over Antigone's body. Then it was even more sad when he stabbed himself in the side. I almost started crying when the messenger described how he fell on Antigone's body and his blood stained her cheeks. Also when the messenger said, "And how he lies dead with the dead, and she is his/ At last, his bride in the house of the dead" (Antigone Exodus 75-76). I like these last two lines because even though Antigone and Haemon are dead, they will both meet in the after-life and marry eachother there.
When the messenger is done describing how Eurydice's son dies she goes and kills herself. When the Messenger tells Creon that her wife is dead I was surprised. I thought that the queen would mourn over her son and Creon would die, but it was the opposite. Once Eurydice left I thought that she was going to her home to cry. Then the Messenger comes again and has to tell Creon the bad news. I like how Sophocle's describes how Eurydice dies. How she died was pretty dramatic. It was especially dramatic when the Messenger says, "She stood before the altar, and her heart/ welcomed the knife her own hand guided" (Antigone Exodus 112-113). I really like the way Sophocle's describes people dying compared to Shakespeare's way.
I think it is Creon's fault for everyone's death. Since Creon was so stubborn and didn't bury Polynices, Antigone buried and got caught while in the act of burying him. She was sent to a stone tomb and because of her action she commited suicide. Haemon pleaded to his father to let her go. Creon was so stubborn towards his son, and said he will not let her go because of her "bad actions". Since Antigone was not set free and she commited suicide Haemon decided to commit suicide as well. Eurydice commited suicide because her son died. Creon's stubborness caused Antigone to die, which caused Haemon to die, which caused Eurydice to die.